My Fantasy Creature
Posted by Emily on July 25, 2007
I walk around this enchanted planet unaware what I will discover. The vegetation is lush and full of colour, as I walk past a florescent pink tree I hear a sudden burst of thunder. I look back with caution, I can’t believe my eyes, standing in front of me is… a tree!! But not just any ordinary tree it looked more like a vampire tree. I could tell by the wings as large as an elephant and razor sharp teeth. Surrounding the vampire tree were bat-bats with baseball bat bodies and vampire wings and teeth slightly smaller than the tree.
July 29th, 2007 at 11:35 am
Hey Emily,
Very interesting post.
I like the little “batbats”. They have a funny name.
Keep cool
NAomi
August 1st, 2007 at 9:52 am
Hi Emily! Great work! Your fantasy creature is really interesting! Please visit my blog. Don’t forget to leave a comment! Good luck!
August 10th, 2007 at 4:03 pm
Hello Emily
I am Milly from Te Awamutu Intermediate (New Zealand).
I was reding your fantasy creature and the first thing I thought was how much descriptive language you used.
I liked the idea of the tree looking like a vampire it was very cool.
Leave a comment on my blog
Thanks Milly
August 10th, 2007 at 4:05 pm
very sorry reading not reding
August 20th, 2007 at 4:00 pm
Hello Emily
Thanks for the comment!! I think your blog is fantastic
Bye!!!
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